this game is awesome! I really look forward to seeing where you go with it. I don't know if you want bug reports, but I ran into one in the back cracking scene, I was going through the dialogue quickly (not skipping, just clicking through) and the dialogue box went away and I couldn't progress, had to reload the whole game. I ran into a similar situation in the kitchen H-scene (hitting from behind, you know?) where all the UI went away- no meters or any buttons. I was able to complete the scene manually, but after climax the buttons were still gone so I couldn't leave and had to reload the game. I'm playing on newgrounds on web, if that matters.
other than that, though, I loved it!!